the party

ne day later, the baker came with the mayor and a crowd of firemen and policemen. They had heard about Lucy’s birthday party and wanted to congratulate her on her special day.”birthdays,” he said.’”
You did not explain why the grandson drove the baker’s van or why the milkman came in his milk float. You should give some background information or details about your characters and their actions to make them more realistic and relatable. For example, you could write “The grandson drove the baker’s van because his grandfather had hurt his back and needed some rest. The milkman came in his milk float because he wanted to surprise Lucy with some fresh milk and cheese.” soon the old baker drove home in his van his back was much better now that same day