THE PARTY

“It was Lucy’s birthday. Her mum gave her a party.”Just then, the baker came along. ‘Here’s your cakes,’ he said.”Lucy smiled and thanked the baker for the cakes. They looked delicious and had colourful sprinkles on top. She wondered what flavours they were. She decided to share them with her friends and guests later.

She looked around and saw that her mum had decorated the garden with balloons, streamers, and banners. There was a big sign that said “Happy Birthday Lucy!” in bright letters. Lucy felt happy and excited. She loved her mum and appreciated all the effort she had put into making her birthday special.

She saw some familiar faces among the crowd. There was her best friend Alice, who had brought her a teddy bear as a present. There was her teacher Mrs. Jones, who had given her a book of fairy tales. There was her neighbour Mr. Smith, who had made her a wooden puzzle. And there was her cousin Tom, who had come all the way from London to celebrate with her.

Lucy hugged them all and thanked them for their gifts. She felt lucky to have so many people who cared about her. She wondered who else would come to her party and what surprises they would bring.

She heard a loud honk from the street. She turned and saw a big red fire truck parked outside her house. She gasped in amazement. She loved fire trucks and firefighters. She ran to the gate and opened it.

She saw a group of firefighters wearing helmets and uniforms. They waved at her and smiled. They had brought a huge cake shaped like a fire engine with candles on top. They also had a card that said “Happy Birthday Lucy! From your friends at the fire station.”

Lucy couldn’t believe it. She felt like she was dreaming. She ran towards them and hugged them one by one. They laughed and congratulated her on her birthday.

They carried the cake into the garden and placed it on a table next to the other cakes. They sang “Happy Birthday” to Lucy and invited her to blow out the candles. Lucy closed her eyes and made a wish.

She wished that this day would never end.

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people who cared about her. She wondered who else would come to her party and what surprises they would bring.

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I’m glad you are continuing your story. It sounds like Lucy is having a wonderful birthday party with lots of surprises and guests. 😊

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You did not use capital letters for Lucy’s name and the word “he”. You should always capitalize proper nouns and the first word of a sentence.
You did not use punctuation marks to separate your sentences and clauses. You should use a period or a comma to indicate where one sentence ends and another begins. For example, you could write “Lucy was happy. So was the baker. He was an elderly man.” or “Lucy was happy, so was the baker. He was an elderly man.”
You did not explain why the baker was happy or how he was related to Lucy or the party. You introduced him earlier as someone who brought cakes for Lucy, but you did not mention anything else about him. You should give some background information or details about your characters to make them more interesting and believable. For example, you could write “The baker was happy to see Lucy’s joy. He had known her since she was a baby and had always baked cakes for her birthdays. He was an elderly man with a kind smile and a white beard.”
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You have added some more details to your story. That’s good. 👍

However, I noticed that you repeated some information that you already wrote before. You wrote “He was an elderly man” twice in the same paragraph. You also wrote “He had a white hair and mustache” and “He was an elderly man with a kind smile and a white beard”. These sentences are contradictory and redundant. You should avoid repeating yourself and use different words to describe your characters. For example, you could write “He had a white hair and mustache that matched his white baker’s hat” or “He had a kind smile and a bushy beard that made him look like Santa Claus”.

I also noticed that you did not use quotation marks for the baker’s dialogue. You wrote “esting and believable. For example, you could write “The baker was happy to see Lucy’s joy. He had known her since she was a baby and had always baked cakes for her birthdays.” This sentence is confusing and does not make sense. You should use quotation marks to indicate what the baker said and separate it from the rest of the sentence. For example, you could write “The baker was happy to see Lucy’s joy. ‘I have known you since you were a baby and I have always baked cakes for your birthdays,’ he said.”

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You have added some more characters to your story. That’s interesting. 😊

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You did not start your sentence with a capital letter. You should always capitalize the first word of a sentence.
You did not use a period or a comma to separate your sentences and clauses. You should use a period or a comma to indicate where one sentence ends and another begins. For example, you could write “Example, you could write ‘He had a white hair and mustache that matched his white baker’s hat.’ The baker was happy to see Lucy’s joy. ‘I have known you since you were a baby and I have always baked cakes for your birthdays,’ he said.”
You did not use quotation marks correctly. You should use single quotation marks for dialogue and double quotation marks for quotes within dialogue. For example, you could write “The baker was happy to see Lucy’s joy. ‘I have known you since you were a baby and I have always baked cakes for your birthdays,’ he said.”
You did not explain why the grandson and the milkman were there or why the milkman was crying. You should give some background information or details about your characters and their emotions to make them more realistic and relatable. For example, you could write “His grandson was there too. He had come to help his grandfather with the delivery. He was proud of his grandfather and loved his cakes. So did the milkman, who was crying tears of joy. He had been friends with the baker for many years and had seen Lucy grow up.”
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You did not start your sentence with a capital letter. You should always capitalize the first word of a sentence.
You did not use a period or a comma to separate your sentences and clauses. You should use a period or a comma to indicate where one sentence ends and another begins. For example, you could write “Dialogue. For example, you could write ‘The baker was happy to see Lucy’s joy. ‘I have known you since you were a baby and I have always baked cakes for your birthdays,’ he said.’ His grandson was there too.”
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