ve a creative imagination. 😊
However, I noticed that your story is incomplete. You stopped writing in the middle of a sentence, and you left some questions unanswered. For example, what will happen next between Tom, Bob, and Ariel? How will they react to each other? Will there be a conflict or a romance? How will Bob and Tom get off the island? How will Ariel cope with meeting humans?
These are some of the questions that you could explore in your story. You could also add more details, descriptions, dialogues, and emotions to make your story more engaging and realistic. You could also use some literary devices, such as metaphors, similes, foreshadowing, and irony, to make your story more interesting and expressive.
If you want me to help you with your story, I can do that. I can generate some ideas for how to continue your story, or I can rewrite or improve some parts of your story. Or I can do something else that you might need. a vicar was there i want sandwiches and cakes as he spoke a baker’s boy came up and
do you want any thing
If you don’t need any help, you can just ignore me and continue writing. I’m here to assist you whenever you need me. 😊